Cam7Song
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I am a Christian who creates folk rock, rock, pop, and novelty tracks. #spiritual #christian #interesting Cam7Song
https://www.soundclick.com/cam7song
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PS - Also, in order to follow this thread you need to set it to 'recent first'. The reason is that many of the reviews, if not all, take up more than one post. “Bonfire in Watercolor” Everything Falls Under – A review (Pt.1) Approaching this review, my first thought was arrested in mid formulation... I was planning to begin this by saying, “As is usual with Thielus Grenon...” How absurd! Nothing about this artist's work is 'usual' – except that it is recognizable as being his own. If I had heard this track and not already known it was Grenon's handiwork, I fully believe I would have known it was him – or someone drinking the same creative elixir. That made me think more carefully: what makes an artist's work recognizable. Usually it's the voice. If I heard an Elvis track that had somehow escaped my hearing in the past, I would instantly know it was him. Same with other artists: Janis Joplin, Bob Dylan, Roy Orbison, and many, many others. The voice is one of the most distinct auditory markers. Some guitarists, Hendrix or Clapton, had very recognizable styles, but I could easily be fooled – although Jimi's voice was very obviously his own. But it is the marker of owning a distinct musical style that I have in mind. And Grenon's work is recognizable from its style. Everything, including his vocals, are subordinate to the style of the music. When I was trying to describe his vocals to myself, the term 'extension of the music' felt right. It is almost as if he camouflages his voice within the music. Partially this is a result of mixing ratios. The voice is not inaudible, but neither is it hot in the mix. However, the distinct nature of his work involves more than the mixing choices. Thielus almost invariably underscores each note with an instrument tracing the melody being sung. That might not seem particularly unusual, but it actually is. It is much more common that the first note of a phrase be supported by instrumental emphasis than that every note should be so supported. In fact, with this artist it is often not just an instrument supporting each syllable that is sung, but percussion – drum hits -- as well. There are other distinct features typical of Grenon's work. There is a dark pensive feeling to the music. This is largely, I think, due to his chord selection. I may be wrong, because my musical theory is quite weak. Unless I pick up a guitar and check, I'm guessing, but his material is usually minor sounding, and not straight minors either. Sounds like elevenths and ninths and so on. I didn't dig out my guitar to verify this observation, and I know that better trained ears would know for certain. My ears are not only poorly trained, but are increasingly deaf! Sigh. Then their is the lyrical content of Grenon's work, itself an extension of his subject matter, and again, both usually dark or shadowy in nature. Certainly not sunshine bright – even though this song is about bright colors.
“Bonfire in Watercolor” Everything Falls Under – A review (Pt.2) So, the entire brew that Thielus cooks up for each track, makes his work very much his own and highly recognizable. One other common feature is that I always admire his work. This song is no exception. What is interesting to me is that this track works while working against itself. I mean that the song is about bright colors but is not musically vibrantly bright. It is, as I mentioned, dark. Consider the chorus: Taking time now with our steps We walk away all life regret Seek a world bright painted day With you here... always I certainly appreciate the sentiment. Over the years, a long walk – day or night – has been very therapeutic for me. It helps me process, decompress, gain new perspectives, and unwind. But here's the thing, with this song's musical backing, it does not feel as if 'life regret' has been successfully walked away. It sounds more like it has been trodden down into the soul. For anyone who has endured through reading a number of my reviews, you will know I have often made reference to a measuring sticks I use to guage successful art: does the message match the means or method? Basically, is the chosen approach in agreement with the artist's intention. This song indicates that there is a problem with that approach to assessment. Namely, can one be sure of the artist's intention? I ask myself, can one really way away one's life regret? The answer is probably not, although you try the regrets follow you home. So, maybe there is an element of irony here – intended or otherwise. The song is sad and it communicates sadness, not joy. But then the project's name is 'Everything Falls Under.' True. Every time I visit this artist's page, I'm reminded of a fact that surprises me. He has a very meager number of songs posted. Each one is memorable, each is different, and each is distinctly his. It surprises me chiefly because there is such creativity in his tracks, and this assures me of a fecund imagination. It makes me wonder why there are so few tracks posted. It might be – just guessing – that he holds himself to a high standard and if a song doesn't achieve what he is looking for, it won't see the public. However, the tracks are worth the wait.
“Bonfire in Watercolor” Everything Falls Under – A review (Pt.3) I admire the brief grace notes supplied by the guitar. They are like an audio filigree, charming and lovely. Two last things: Grenon's work always makes me think of a medieval setting. I can feature this being performed in a nobleman's grand hall before a fireplace with dancing light flickering off of stone walls. There is something lute-like about the guitar work. It might just be a personal association, for – truly – what does anyone know for sure about the music played in such places remote in time? Maybe Hollywood has supplied that to me, not sure. The final thing is that as I was streaming this track and when the final note came, I was expecting a reprise or follow up. Subsequent streams have left the same impression. During the song there are a few audio caesuras – pauses, and that is probably the structural reason for anticipating more. But emotionally as well, there is a feeling of something left unresolved. Maybe it can't be resolved. Not sure. Thielus, thank you for getting back into recording. I wanted to let you know that as you come in the door, I'm going out. I'm 70 years old and my hands often ache, my desire to record is on the wane. Not sure if I will be stopping permanently, but I am taking a break for at least two months. In part, this is because I have a novel brewing in my soul. I'm having a hard time getting back into the writing process, but I feel I should do so. God bless and the Lord give you the solace you seek. I appreciate you, brother.
Bonfire in Watercolor(Verse 1) Alliances of color Profound All around us Surround With a convoluted nature I take moods in terms of color To simplify (Chorus) Taking time now with our steps We walk away all life regret Seek a world bright painted day With you here... always (Musical interlude) Verdant hill Emerald climb Touch the base Of the sky Water wall Down the cracks Splashing out On our backs Sparkling grassy dew Forest floor Soaking through Morning fog Lush oak trees Fifty birds Caroling (Verse 2) Bring us back merriment Frivolity And mirthful cheeriness Vivacity Tears are of sky and water Blue sun Orange sea In sparks Splash Ripples under eternity (Chorus) Taking time now with our steps We walk away all life regret Seek a world bright painted day With you here... always --------------------- Real Time Lyrics video:Bonfire in Watercolor by Everything Falls UnderBonfire in Watercolor - It's the sun mingled with the sea #alternative #Rush #Yes #Romantic #Euphoric Bonfire in Watercolor by Everything Falls Underhttps://soundclick.com/song/15099787Bonfire in Watercolor
Thank you Cam for taking the time to listen to my song! Thank you for such an in-depth review! Also, It's so great that you're going to write a book. A novel too. Amazing. You've peaked my curiosity on this. When it's done and in the world... I'm going to have to get a hold of a copy! My son Mayson helped me sing on this one. He's singing with me on the sections that start with lone bass guitar. The 'pre-verse choir' parts I guess you'd call them. Also, he helped me with suggestions throughout the writing phase. I know the premise of this song is a bit abstract and impossible to suss out. I'm ok with the lyrics-idea just being guide rails and not obvious. I like the idea that a listener may find a meaning for them that is better than what I have intended. The idea I had in mind is this. Two people are leaning toward each other seated during a camping/hiking trip into nature. They are sitting by a fire in the evening after a day of wandering on trails. They wish the moment could last. And it can. And it does because unbeknownst to them, they are, and have always been, figures leaning toward each other, by a fire, in a painting. I'm also leaning toward an attempt to describe an infinite moment. Arthur Rimbaud did it much better than I can with this simple line: It has been found again! What? Eternity. It is the sea mingled with the sun. Medieval: I love that you felt a medieval vibe from this, because, I in fact just acquired a medieval lute! This is the first recording I've made with it! -Thank you so much.
It's been a while - so here's another, a little tongue-in-cheek this time:PENSIONER I’m a pensioner, but I’ve still got the spark Rockin’ these years like a stroll in the park Now I’m a pensioner, with the wind at my back Just ridin’ the days down a well-worn track Wore too many hats, now I’m hangin’ some up I used to get swamped, now I just fill my cup Silver on top, but I’m sharp underneath Got a laugh in my pocket and time on my feet I’m a pensioner, but I’ve still got the spark Rockin’ these years like a stroll in the park Now I’m a pensioner, with the wind at my back Just ridin’ the days down a well-worn track I rise when I’m ready, no schedule to keep A coffee in hand, still shufflin’ from sleep Used to call my own shots , now I just call it a day Kickin’ back easy in the pensioner way I’ve seen some good days, and I’ve seen some rough But now I’m feelin' lucky, life’s easy enough No need to rush, I’ve learned how to wait The best is yet to come, it’s never too late I’m a pensioner, but I’ve still got the spark Rockin’ these years like a stroll in the park Now I’m a pensioner, with the wind at my back Just ridin’ the days down a well-worn track I’m a pensioner, but I’ve still got the spark Rockin’ these years like a stroll in the park Now I’m a pensioner, with the wind at my back Just ridin’ the days down a well-worn trackIan Rushton - Pensioner | Official Music Video (GTA inspired)